This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.
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t was a windy night and shutters
to almost all the shops had been downed except a few illegal liquor shops who
thought it better to make money rather than fear the onslaught of the
hawaldars. If someone did come and say anything they could offer a bottle or
two which would surely pacify them. Several shady figures lined in front of the
shops and discussed their business which ranged from changing the face of the
nation to robbing the local banks.
Rajan was a regular visitor to
the area and liked to spend a lot of time interacting with the number of wise
people who had ingenious ideas. Sometimes he could overhear some sinister conspiracies
shaping up or a plot hatching. This would really make him curious. He had the
knack of starting conversations and would approach anyone unapologetically. Not
that anyone said anything as most of the stuff people said there were rumours
and utter nonsense.
He had been hearing of a series
of bomb explosions that were being planned across the city. It really made him
excited when news like this made rounds. Although more often than not this
would prove a false alarm occasionally it did have some authenticity. He had a
childlike glee on his face and he immediately wanted to be a part of the
exercise.
He had always wanted to be part
of such a big operation and it filled in him a sense of pride and satisfaction.
He sometimes felt a pang of fear but he would quickly try to forget it as he
could not afford to be weak in such critical matters. After speaking to a
couple of old hags and a few notorious looking young fellows he made his way
down the alley to an abandoned building which was planned to be the city market
once. Due to the fallout of discussions between the local authorities and the
builders the construction had been left midway and the building was locked out
till any deal could be materialized.
Rajan had got some clues that the
bombers were put up in the building and could use a few extra hands. He had
some experience in bomb making and could use the gun also if need be. Once he
was in front the building he saw that it was locked from the outside and there
was an outer wall with barbed wires. There was no way someone could make way
inside. As soon as he was about to leave something flashed from the direction
of the building. That was the signal he had been waiting for and he quickly
started scanning the wall. Towards the back of the building a part of the wall
had been cleverly camouflaged by a few trees through which a grown up man could
reach the back of the compound by crawling on the ground.
He made his way through the trees
and with great difficulty reached the other end. He was out of breath when he
finally untangled himself and dropped down on his knees to rest. Before he
could react two men with automatic AK-47s had towered in front of him and were
about to pull the trigger. His heart skipped a beat and before he could say
anything he was shoved towards the side with a blow on his face with the hilt
of the rifle. The armed guards threatened to kill him and asked him if he was a
spy. Rajan had to quickly clarify that he merely wanted to be a part of the
mission and mentioned a few of the names who he had interacted with outside.
The guards were still sceptical and called out their senior to take a look at
Rajan.
The head guard came over after a few
minutes flanked by three other guards. It seemed that these people were a
proper outfit and had been designing the mission very precisely. It further
added to the excitement of Rajan and he immediately decided that this was the
opportunity he had been waiting for. He explained his situation to the head
guard who was a short man with a big moustache which made him look like a dwarfed
version of a comic character which he could not recollect.
It took some time to convince the
group that he was there to help them and only after sufficient enquiry did they
allow him to be a part of the mission. The group wanted a few extra men as the
scale of the operation had been beefed up at the last moment. But they were extremely
wary of troubles that an unidentified man could create and as such they wanted
to exercise sufficient restraint before recruiting.
Two guards led Rajan to the main
dormitory which was filled with all kinds of sacks, rifles and materials to
make bombs. Around a dozen men were working on the devices and a single man was
instructing all of them to increase their speed as they were short of time. It
bothered Rajan a bit as he did not want to miss out on the action. He quickly
greeted the leader and explained himself. The leader was convinced with him and
had trust in the head guard’s judgement. He started explaining the plan to him but
was clever enough to keep him in out of the loop about the matters that the
leader thought should not be disclosed. He was given his brief and told that
the explosions would take place the day after on the Republic day.
It was too less time for Rajan to
get into the thick and thin of things and he started talking to the rest of the
team to get to know what exactly the full plan was. He did not want to miss out
on any details and do some mistake that the operation fails. He was a diligent
and honest team member and he gave his cent percent to the task at hand.
By the end of the day the leader
was satisfied with the progress and called everyone for a meeting to discuss
the tasks that they had to do for the next day. As most of the plan had been
finalized it was time for some dress rehearsal and as such the teams were
divided into 7 groups of two people each. 5 of those groups were to check out
the locations and think of the vantage points where the bombs would be planted.
The 6th team was to manage the control room and the 7th
was to check that all the explosives were working and were in good condition.
Rajan was in one of the location
team and was partnered with a dumb Afghani fellow. The Afghani was the team
incharge and he had to follow the methods devised by the team lead. They
started together and had to scan the full location and devise a strategy with a
full fledged back up plan. It was a very tedious task and they had to do it
discreetly. It took them around 4 hours to have a full plan in place and after satisfying
themselves they started their way back.
On the way Rajan excused himself
for two minutes and went away to make a call to his family. The Afghani was
initially cooperative and understood the young man’s feelings but he also had a
sense of suspicion because he was a new recruit. Rajan soon came back from the
STD booth and looked quite dejected. Afghani tried to display his human touch
and enquired if everything was fine. Rajan was still very low on confidence but
he never told anything about his personal life to anyone.
That night there was a raid on the abandoned
building and the full block of ammunition was captured. In the crossfire almost
all the terrorists were shot dead including Rajan. Local police officials took
great pride in their achievement which was followed by a flurry of promotions
and rewards.
In a lonely corner of the secret
police service compound a ceremony was done to honour Rajan and his services.
No one ever came to know about the heroics of the acclaimed terrorist and his
story was buried somewhere in the big fat books of the just society.
Two minutes of
silence
Two minutes of fame
Where did he go?
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Great idea! All the best.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteThoroughly enjoyable read - best of luck.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Helen :D
DeleteNice read...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Soumitro :)
DeleteWonderful! Very fresh! ATB
ReplyDeleteRajrupa :) Thanks a lot :D
DeleteLovely read, it was a tightly written story.
ReplyDeleteWhy did he go to the STD booth btw, am sorry I am lost there.
Btw, the heroes always go unnoticed. We are too busy with news about who is going to the Cannes and which celebrity is dating whom. :-/ schade!
Well one possible explanation could be a call his seniors in the secret police ;)
DeleteAnd yeah heroes always get unnoticed and most of them wont mind. Perhaps that is why THEY are called heroes :D
Thanks a lot Kappu :)
A very interesting one.. All the best..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sayoni :D
Deletegood one
ReplyDeleteall the best
Thanks Shashiji :)
DeleteDid he tip off the police when he went to the std booth? Very gripping narrative!
ReplyDeleteYeah thats a plausible explanation :)
DeleteThanks a lot :)
Maybe he was a mole who got 'sacrificed' by the police! Hehe, just speculating. Nice read
DeleteYeah he was a mole that i think can be made out by the last few lines. And the purpose to the story is achieved if i have made you speculate. ;)
DeleteUff! JJ, one of the best post I read in the recent past. Keep writing more and more posts like this.. All the best for BAT 29.
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Coming from you SIS this is really special.
DeleteGlad you liked it :)
Great post JJ really kept me glued till the end but yeah I did guess that he might be undercover agent or something. Kudos to you. ATB
ReplyDeleteMy post - Vikas Khair - Two Minutes
I am glad you guessed it right!..Made my job easier :)
DeleteThanks a lot!
Wow! That was honestly gripping...!!:)
ReplyDeleteMy first time here and gosh, you write so well !!!! All the best for BAT :)
Thaanks a lot :)
DeleteAnd thanks for the compliment it really means a lot :)
Unsung heroes are what really touches me....!!
ReplyDeletei just don't like a hero being unsung.....but then as mentioned before........heroes themselves don't want prefer it
Yeah thats the sad truth :)
DeleteThanks for your comment :)
loved the story ! good luck for the BAT :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lott TTT :)
DeleteGood One!! All the best JJ!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Manasa :)
DeleteGood one :) good luck for BAT.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteInteresting story.
ReplyDeleteThanks aativas :)
DeleteDear JJ, you are tagged in my latest post. Check it here
DeleteHey Rajrupa i saw your post now. Thanks a lot for tagging me :). Will surely follow the chain in some time coming week. Tied up with college activities and exams.
DeleteGood post. Keep at it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Richi :D
DeleteVery well written...enjoyed the read
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Karan :)
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